Give’em a good story in your copywriting and they’ll be eating out of the palm of your hand.
Here are couple more ads which I wrote recently. In case you missed the first batch of ads I posted up here, here is a link to make finding them a little easier. http://kevinkatzenberg.com/love-ebay-copywriting-descriptions/
The top one is an EBAY ad I did and the bottom is an ad I did for a friend trying to sell his race car hauler. (By the way … the hauler is still available for sale if any one is interested in going racing.)
I really love weaving stories into copy.
It really helps make a connection with the reader and get them closer to saying ‘Yes’.
I know I love a good story when someone is trying to get me to buy.
Anyways, happy reading.
First is the Sammy Swindell EBay Ad.
Check this out!
This is a signed replica of Sammy Swindell’s Old Milwaukee Sprint Car. This was the ride, I believe, he won his first two WoO championships with back in 81′ and 82′.
Famous drag racer turned car owner, Raymond Beadle, owned his team along with a NASCAR team with Old Milwaukee sponsorship that Tim Richmond drove, before moving to Hendrick.
This is truly a unique collectors item you won’t want to live without.
First … It is signed by Sammy himself on the top wing. Being a Sammy fan, I waited in line anxiously after WoO event back in the mid nineties to get it signed. This is back when Kevin Swindell was just a little tyke playing in the dirt in his dads pit area. Man … the years slide past us pretty fast!
Well … anyways, this car comes in the original box I bought it in (with all of the styrofoam packing).
The second reason you’re not going to want to be without this unique little collectible is the fact that his name is misspelled on the side of the car. If you look closely in the picture provided, Swindell is spelled with only one “L”. We all know how valuable misspellings and factory blemishes can make items.
This should be one of the hottest pieces to add to either your die-cast collection or your Sammy collection … which ever you may have.
It is one of only 5,004 made and who knows if the missing “L” will make it even more valuable.
Ebay makes the transaction as seamless as possible and I can ship within one day of receiving verified payment.
Buyer pays all shipping costs. I prefer to ship USPS Priority Mail, but heck, I’m flexible … as long as all my shipping costs are covered I’ll ship it how you want.
Dan Schlieper’s hauler ad
Ok Guys and Gals late-model racer Dan Schlieper is selling his hauler.
Roll into the track in comfort and style. The first step in being professional is treating yourself and your crew as professionals.
The motor home is a 2004 S&S Frieghtliner Columbia with a 500 Detroit Diesel engine with 252,000 miles and an easy driving 16 speed automatic transmission.
It has full living quarters which sleeps eight and has a six-foot slide out to make the living area even more comfortable.
Queen size master suite in back and twin over cab sleeper.
The couch (which I can confirm is very comfortable) and dinette area converts to sleeping quarters.
The Kitchen area has at home amenities like a sink … refrigerator … and a microwave-oven combination.
2 satellite ready TV’s (one in front and one in master bedroom) with stereo system throughout.
Full private bathroom with shower stall.
Two roof top air conditioners will keep you cool in those blistering summer days.
Living area and trailer power is supplied by a 12kw Onan generator.
Large storage area’s under motor home gives plenty of room to carry everything you need for long trips out-of-town.
Trailer is a 2004 S&S two car over head hauler which has a totally separate car storage area from work area.
New tires on trailer.
Tire racks to hold over 60 mounted tires.
Full work bench area and room to store 2 spare motors. Top quality Lista cabinets.
Large storage areas designed to hold a spare rear end … shock dyno … 55 gallon drum for fuel … gears … welder … along with plenty of general storage areas.
Out side plug-ins for air and electric and sliding rear doors.
Rear lift gate door doubles as a canopy to keep you from baking in the sun while working on the car and in door lights supply overhead lighting.
Internal tie downs for pit cart and ATV and any other equipment you need to bring along.
Serious inquires Email firstname.lastname@example.org for more photos.